tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33982401.post2204849216585707470..comments2024-01-09T21:15:37.808-05:00Comments on Scriptorius Rex: Physician, Heal ThyselfUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33982401.post-52518935289332643712009-06-03T11:54:10.584-04:002009-06-03T11:54:10.584-04:00One of the examples is a line from the bad guy say...One of the examples is a line from the bad guy saying he has to dispatch someone. Really, I should have just written 'kill.' It would sound cool the first way in a modern tale or maybe a high fantasy with Renaissance technology and chivalry and stuff, but not in the context of this story.<br /><br />I didn't really think about just using his name for the title. I've posted now on my decision but I might use your idea if I ever go back further and explain how he got the name.Jeff Draperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11950686688288213875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33982401.post-54977616258819308222009-06-02T23:44:00.885-04:002009-06-02T23:44:00.885-04:00About the modern language, he didn't happen to...About the modern language, he didn't happen to club said enemies to death and then develop feeeeeelings, did he? (laugh) <br /><br />As for the title, this may be too utterly obvious, but I think a story called simply "Othren Four-Scars" would get my attention. But are you going for a similar structure with the titles?Keanan Brandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12638962927055276969noreply@blogger.com